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如何增加2013考研英語(yǔ)作文的閃光點(diǎn)
作文是考研英語(yǔ)中得分較低的一種題型，究其原因，除了平時(shí)缺少練習(xí)之外，同學(xué)們還缺乏作文抓分技巧。同學(xué)們需要掌握一定的作文模板，除此之外，如果能在作文中設(shè)置一些詞匯和句型的閃光點(diǎn)，必定使你的作文如虎添翼。
高分作文標(biāo)志：
1、是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉;2、是否會(huì)使用插入語(yǔ);3、用詞是否多樣、準(zhǔn)確、形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞;5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。
下面給出寫(xiě)好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng)：
1.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀地反映事實(shí)。句子開(kāi)頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫(xiě)結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾的例子：It is ，therefore， high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2.善于使用插入語(yǔ)，比如說(shuō)把副詞、連接詞等，作為插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在動(dòng)詞、助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。舉例如下：Other individuals， however， take the attitude that…
3.一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good， bad ， many， thing， think， people， opinion等等)比如第一條的例子中，applicable替換proper; approaches替換ways; implement替換carry out; sharpen one‘s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力)。
下面舉一篇某位同學(xué)寫(xiě)的優(yōu)秀作文的例子，看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類寫(xiě)作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫(xiě)作手法，精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present， which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ，and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless， feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly替換very;(個(gè)人認(rèn)為替換成overwhelmingly更出彩)
thrilling替換exciting;
sth. exerts a tremendous fascination on sb替換sb. be interested in sth;
google替換search;
an army of替換a lot of.
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology， computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them， in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed是一個(gè)精彩句型，用來(lái)描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情;
Increasing popularity替換more and more popular;
Coincident with…非常地道的句型，表達(dá)“與…一致”的意思，替換With…;
Advancement替換development;
Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換enter into;
Current ( currently )替換now;
Appeal to sb.替換sb. be interested in sth.;
Growing individuals替換more and more people;
It is no exaggeration to say經(jīng)典句型，說(shuō)某事是毫不夸張的。(it goes without exaggeration that更好)
For a start， we can， freely， search desired information at any moment . Little by little， our knowledge will be well enriched， and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally， we can get huge recreations online by chatting， playing games， or delivering email.
For a start替換To begin with;
We can， freely， search用了插入語(yǔ)的寫(xiě)作手法;
our knowledge will be well enriched， and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動(dòng);
Additionally替換In addition / Besides;
Deliver替換send.
There is no denying that ， however， computers can function in the disservice of human beings， in a way， especially the growing violence ，***， porn pictures， AV-films emerging on the screen ， which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that ， however， computers can function in the disservice of human beings，這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個(gè)句型;其次however作為插入語(yǔ);再次，function in the disservice of替換do harm to.
Emerging替換appearing ( fading替換disappearing );
Net citizen網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞。(直接用netizen更好)
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives， despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ，therefore， take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds替換Every coin has two sides;
Computers do play，使用do表示強(qiáng)調(diào);
Positive替換important / good等;
A slice of替換a part of;
Unfavorable替換bad;
Impacts替換effects / influences;
We should， therefore， take advantage of…使用插入語(yǔ);
Fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換advantage ( defects替換disadvantage );
Facet替換aspect.
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