高考英語文字書面表達講評教案4

高三英語看圖作文講評1   下列四幅圖描述了李華一家某一天的經歷。請根據畫面及圖中的有關提示，用第三人稱的口吻寫一篇120字左右的短文。 注意：可以適當增加細節(jié)，并展開合理的想象，使故事完整連貫。   1、認真看圖，確立主題 結合文字和圖畫，確立所要表達的主題是什么。 根據“四幅圖描述了李華一家某一天的經歷”一段文字提示,結合第一幅圖中的日歷上所表示的時間（ 3月8日），我們可以確立本篇書面表達的主題是：李華要做些家務事來為他的媽媽慶�！�3.8”婦女節(jié) 2、圍繞主題，提煉要點 圍繞確立的主題，仔細看圖，初步列出每幅圖的要點。 第一幅圖：李華把他的主意告訴父親 第二幅圖：李華掃地、父親洗衣服 第三幅圖：李華和父親下廚房做菜 第四幅圖：餐桌上有花瓶、飲料、魚、肉等等 3、合理想象，補出要點 將四幅圖連起來并結合考慮每幅圖中的各個細節(jié)進行想象，將隱藏的要點補出來,使故事連貫。 第一幅圖：李華為什么要把他的主意告訴父親：求得父親的幫助或配合 第二幅圖：李華和父親為什么要選擇做家務：這些家務平時都是由母親做的 第三幅圖：可以想象他們做了除圖畫中表現出的:fish, pork外，還可能做了其它菜。比如：chicken, soup and other delicious dishes. 第四幅圖：這幅圖中沒有一個人出現，連母親的影子也沒有。為什么，留給考生進行合理的想象：李華和父親是不是藏起來了？其目的是什么：可能是等母親回家時以給她一個驚喜。 4、確定時態(tài)，譯出要點 確定表達時所用的正確時態(tài)，將圍繞主題初選出的要點和經過合理想象補出的要點翻譯出來。 本篇敘述的是李華一家過去某一天（“3.8”婦女節(jié)）所發(fā)生的事，應該用過去時來進行表達。 第一幅圖：On March the eighth,Women’s Day, Li Hua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it.He asked his father to help him. 第二幅圖：They decided to do some housework,which was always done by his mother.Li Hua cleaned the house completely.His father did some washing. 第三幅圖：They made a good meal,cooking fish,pork,chicken,soup and some other delicious dishes. 第四幅圖：Li Hua laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the table.They hid themselves behind the door,waiting for Mother.They wanted to give her a happy surprise.When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table,she felt very curious and happy. 5、連句成篇，過渡自然 對譯出的要點通過合理的組合，加上必要的連接詞或詞語以及照顧到文章的首尾呼應， 再加上必要的結束語。 It was March the eighth that day,Women’s Day.Li Hua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it.He asked his father to help him.First they decided to do some housework,which was always by his mother.Li Hua cleaned the house completely while his father did some washing.Then they made a good meal,cooking fish,pork,chicken,soup and some other delicious dishes. Li Hua laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the table.After that they hid themselves behind the door,waiting for Mother so as to give her a happy surprise.When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table,she felt very curious and happy.The family had a pleasant festival.

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