GRE英語(yǔ)考試作文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章中邏輯關(guān)系

　　Issue 24

　　"Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."

　　這個(gè)題目是講主流和非主流的關(guān)系，提的方面是科學(xué)領(lǐng)域內(nèi)。但是這個(gè)題目里面我自認(rèn)為的一個(gè)問(wèn)題是，speaker把a(bǔ)strology，fortune-telling，psychic，和paranormal pursuits也歸結(jié)為科學(xué)的范疇內(nèi)了，但這些都是我們通常成為的偽科學(xué)(pseudoscience)的幾個(gè)典型方面。

　　這個(gè)題目，目前我沒(méi)有想到什么好的方面來(lái)支持這個(gè)speaker的正確性。希望有持支持觀點(diǎn)的朋友來(lái)說(shuō)說(shuō)你自己的看法偽科學(xué)的相關(guān)釋義附在點(diǎn)評(píng)最后處

　　This statement actually consists of two claims: (1) that non-mainstream areas of inquiry are vital in satisfying human needs, and (2) that these areas are therefore vital to society. I concede that astrology, fortune- telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits respond to certain basic human needs.

　　干凈利索的分析了題目，但是個(gè)人認(rèn)為還不是分析的很透徹。

　　However, in my view the potential harm they can inflict on their participants and on society far outweighs their psychological benefits.

　　自己觀點(diǎn)出來(lái)了，反對(duì)。是一個(gè)讓步的關(guān)系，先承認(rèn)了是有此方面的作用，用了however來(lái)了個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折給從更大的方面給否了。

　　Admittedly, these non-mainstream areas of inquiry address certain human needs, which mainstream science and other areas of intellectual inquiry inherently cannot.

　　開(kāi)始駁斥了，首先肯定了其之作用。

　　One such need involves our common experience as humans that we freely make our own choices and decisions in life and therefore carry some responsibility for their consequences. Faced with infinite choices, we experience uncertainty, insecurity, and confusion; and we feel remorse, regret, and guilt when in retrospect our choices turn out be poor ones. Understandably, to prevent these bad feelings many people try to shift the burden of making difficult choices and decisions to some nebulous authority outside themselves--by relying on the stars or on a stack of tarot cards for guidance.

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